seems like an interesting concept, the code doesnt seem to have bugs (i assume the name disappearing is a stylistic choice) but there's quite a bit of grammar and spelling errors, all pretty easy fixes. Also maybe shorten the rant at the beginning a bit? anyways, i'm looking forward to your future projects!
Thanks so much for testing out my demo! The whole thing is in the early stages, but the main problem as far as spelling errors go and other mistakes there, is because english isn't my first language, so yeah it was to be expected. But I will check it out again for sure.
Once again thanks so much for taking the time to write this, it's really helpful and I appreciate it a lot 🙂
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seems like an interesting concept, the code doesnt seem to have bugs (i assume the name disappearing is a stylistic choice) but there's quite a bit of grammar and spelling errors, all pretty easy fixes. Also maybe shorten the rant at the beginning a bit? anyways, i'm looking forward to your future projects!
Thanks so much for testing out my demo! The whole thing is in the early stages, but the main problem as far as spelling errors go and other mistakes there, is because english isn't my first language, so yeah it was to be expected. But I will check it out again for sure.
Once again thanks so much for taking the time to write this, it's really helpful and I appreciate it a lot 🙂